Looking for critics of my website tree advice

[M.D. Vaden]

Lately, I put several pages worth of tree advice on our website for homeowner information. Included is our 12 signs of tree hazards on its own page. The tree care advice is an option on the advice page.

Please respond here, should you get the chance, so all can see glow or flames together.

We are at www.mdvaden.com

The advice pages are in plain sight.

If you like gardening, or know those who do, feel free instead to access us by first going to the new AMERICAN GARDEN MUSEUM. An online way for landscaping to be presented.

If you go that route - click the picture to enter, go to GARDENS, go to OREGON (only underlined states under map have contributions), then VADEN at BEAVERTON.

The third paragraph is our promo for arboriculture which so many designers fail to appreciate.

At the bottom of the museum garden page, is a link to our website.

The Museum is at http://www.americangardenmuseum.com

Let me know what you think. I accidentally added cambium for phloem in one place, now corrected. I'm open to ideas or errors I missed.

 

[NeTree]

Looks good.

 

[kf_tree]

since most tree svc/ landscapeing site's are pretty poorly done,i have to give you credit. its well done.

but there are some grammar and wording issue's i do not like.

"Even a 1" diameter limb can cause serious skull injury" skull injury does not sound correct to me.


" Watching pruning is never a casual spectator sport" watching pruning does not sound correct.

i just read through it pretty quick and yes, i'm knit picking. but there's a bunch wording and grammar issues. a big over use of ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. and sentence's that don't know where to end.
do you know any english majors that could help clean it up?

good luck

 

[M.D. Vaden]

Nothing will be considered nitt-picking.

I may leave some figurative language as is, but sometimes its hard to notice one's own use of words that may miscommunicate.

My goal is to srutinize the whole site, and when my web guy does the next batch of fine-tuning in May, some wording things can be improved.

 

[ORclimber]

Wow, good looking site. In line 2 of "Do you want a super garden" bed is missing a d.

 

[John Paul Sanborn]

I had a problem with "skull injury" too. I'm not a big fan of "risk advertising".

Alos i don't mind spectators, aslong as they stay out of the hardhat area

 

[treeclimber165]

Hey Vaden,
You could have JPS proofread it for you and check for spelling errors!

 

[M.D. Vaden]

I've noticed J P S 's spelling before. I'm sure his fingers are dragsters on a keyboard. But his information is good.

Also, aside from hardhat area (and we've seen fenceboard chips, etc., travel as far as 40') - you guys must get these people that stand right in front of the windows until you get their attention.

 

[Kevin]

Looks clean.
I see duplicate pictures.

 

[TheTreeSpyder]

You 'noticed' JP's speeling?