Those are good wasps/flys, they lay eggs in & harass aphids (and more), they won't harm they'll poke around for victims. If you're seeing swarms of them then it's possible there's something their after, not sure what different insects pests you have there. Southern ag has a pretty cheap good baccilus product, it does work.
Like pdql said root balls sometimes take a beating. A heavy clay soil will be hard, will hold water & suffocate roots because they can't breath. if you can squeeze a handful of soil & it keeps it shape it's likely high clay low organic matter.
For example lf you got 1"-2" rain & you were to shovel, probe etc soil/yard but it's hard to do & dry under the top layer that's what the roots are fighting.
The branch in the pic with brown tips was broke/bent and healing. If the whole trees have burnt tips could be excess nitrogen.
In my area cedar typically grow in fertile swamps/peat bogs with standing water for long periods.
I have 6' cedars in large pots that I'm growing to plant in reed canary grass, they'll go through 3-5+ gallons water day, our temps have been crazy hot 85-90 very sunny no clouds with severe drought. End of day soil will be little damp too dry next day. Other states could have different issues,probs,pests. Our climate is hard on stiff but Deer are the hardest on cedars.
It's normal for some branches to die off especially inner ones, something else to consider is they are now sitting different relative to sun at the nursery so the tree will kill least productive branches
If you see issues worsen or declining then maybe worry by the pics they dont look bad, there's new growth which means your roots are healthy enough to produce growth
Overall I wouldn't be concerned now, it's only been couple weeks, if the brown branches are worrying you snip them off....problem solved.